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god i hate the slowlyness of upload of dA
this was meant to be uploaded on the 30th of july its a nice way to end the month nevertheless :D
im tired og always taking so long and whatnot
specially when there's this huge tormoil over at my place
it's the second time me and my dad had stupid argument over the internet

seriously eesh

also ill stop posting extensive bakground stories to the characters as a form of protection :\
too many thieves as of late
soo if you wanna see some background of Éron check out the previous version here
so after that fiasco of the first version hopefully i redeemed his name and himself as the main character of my book
i think i portrayed him nicely and came out quite good and he is truly how i envisioned him right now :D

onwards to the King Raziel

~cheers

p.s. nice sword upgrade wouldnt you say? :XD:

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:iconseitentaisei7:
It really has become more evident how much influence in quality a bg or a little bit of ground to put on the feet has in your works.

Beginning with the character, the details very clear especially on his nose, sword and boots. The hair is neat without looking too anime ish.
Although these facts, I feel a lack of smoothness (or a intermedium color) on his face mainly on the cheekbone.

Other thing which doesn't look very well in a close analysis, is the vest; it looks very stiff and unnatural on the shoulders.

Next point: the bg
The textured stairs give a more realistic look and the fact that they have no end, fading on the white, transmit a feeling of danger ahead. I really can see Eron running on the stairs, stop to look back and say something heroic and run again towards a danger like it was his destiny since the beginning of his story.

The big image on the back for some reason don't make feel that lack which I pointted before. Being one of the main characters, or THE main character, this suits it very well.

To finish, regarding the work on its whole, I find the name a bit distracting maybe because is close to the area faded away of the bigger image of Eron and cause contrast.
Unlike Ivor, this work turned out pretty good and successfull :)
Keep the good job!
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:iconzeredek:
Wow you're good! That look amazing! I wish i could draw like that!

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From the lake of fire they have come,
Fierce, almighty legions, one by one.
When the flames of glory touch the sky...
Trailblazers do or die!
:icondesertfire:
I love the design!! I epecially love the stairs!! :wow: :faint:

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I must try to keep my head together.
I might not be there when you need me but.
I must try to keep my head down.

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:iconnightmaregk13:
eheh thanks :D

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:iconnightmaregk13:
thank you :D

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:icondesertfire:
welcome :)

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I must try to keep my focus, and I know.
I must try to keep my head together.
I might not be there when you need me but.
I must try to keep my head down.

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:iconxhastex:
very nice work buddy....
not a fan of the bg...it looks good but i dont like it as a personal thing....
everything else looks sw33t...XD...
yup....its a cool blade...XD...

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:iconnightmaregk13:
why not im curious :XD:
do tell :D

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:iconaurifex:
Love the pic altogether. I gotta agree, the sword upgrade rulz. Too bad about the whole parent thing, hope it works out soon.

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The next time you yell at your mum or whoever you live with because they interrupted your attempt at winning an achievement on the XBOX360, think about this: is it really you who is getting that achievement or is it the character you play in the game?
:iconnightmaregk13:
it wont trust me
and don't feel bad about it :XD:
it's about time someone faces him
he thinks im always right and i think he's too proud of himself to ever admit he's wrong specially to me
i think he cant stand the fact that im right for once :P

thank you :aww:

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:iconaurifex:
Heh, had that problem a while back. Told him to grow up and walked away.

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